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Feb 16, 2007
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Love is not, give and take
Love drew a circle in my mind and begged me take a closer look
I saw a centered ivory throne, an invitation that I took
I kneeled beneath a studded crown, took the oath upon myself
The kingdom mine, kneel and bring, heart and all it's wealth
Your heart retreated, left a whisper, echoed through my halls
A king self centered cannot rule, a heart because he calls
Remove the circle, better still, my heart upon your throne
Serve my heart if you be king, my heart above your own
Love drew a circle in my mind and begged me take a closer look
I saw the ivory centered throne, the studded crown love took
I searched the room my queen to find, kneeling at my side
Be still my king, my heart, begs you come inside.
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alan
19 years 2 months ago
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Cathy
19 years 2 months ago
Awesome
Awesome write.. Very good flow.. Was not any left guessing or wondering here.. Very good.. Brought many things to me.. All put a smile on my face..
Cathy
iluvblu4e595
18 years 8 months ago
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