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Love is not, give and take

Love drew a circle in my mind and begged me take a closer look I saw a centered ivory throne, an invitation that I took I kneeled beneath a studded crown, took the oath upon myself The kingdom mine, kneel and bring, heart and all it's wealth Your heart retreated, left a whisper, echoed through my halls A king self centered cannot rule, a heart because he calls Remove the circle, better still, my heart upon your throne Serve my heart if you be king, my heart above your own Love drew a circle in my mind and begged me take a closer look I saw the ivory centered throne, the studded crown love took I searched the room my queen to find, kneeling at my side Be still my king, my heart, begs you come inside.

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alan

19 years 2 months ago

Wasn't able to post comments

Wasn't able to post comments until today. Wanted to thank you for your  feedback!
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Cathy

19 years 2 months ago

Awesome

Awesome write.. Very good flow.. Was not any left guessing or wondering here.. Very good.. Brought many things to me.. All put a smile on my face..

 

Cathy

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iluvblu4e595

18 years 8 months ago

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Very creative piece with lots of detail. Paints a great picture, good write : )