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Garbage Day, 5/14/26

Slowly Making Friends

Peach Flavoured Jolly Ranchers

Falling for Insects

— JoeyRoberts2028, May 14, 2026

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Direction: How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: GA, USA

Favorite Poets: George Carlin, Michael Anthony

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