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Jan 22, 2007
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Determined
Silence will not prevail
Failure will not set sail
No sir this young man
Will do all he possibly can
To prove that he will achieve
All the dreams you did deceive
Your rejection will not stop
This lad from reaching the top
You can try but you won’t succeed
He has all he will ever really need
A bunch of dreams that you ignored
He deeply loved and has stored
Into his heart until the very end
These dreams he does closely defend
When he said yes you said a simple no
Is that him silently screaming I told you so?
Comments
Cathy
19 years 3 months ago
Precistance..
Go past what others believe in your dreams.. Very true.. Have had to go past or even against many times..
Cathy