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Apr 30, 2026
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April Fooled
April Fooled
Spring has come with sunshine
A time when plants begin to flourish
Mothers pull out last year’s plants and installs new plants
Singing and smiling hoping for growth
But now comes snow, so sad
Betrayed
— Clentin, Apr 30, 2026
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About This Poem
Last Few Words: A Triquain. My thoughts about Spring in April spoiled by weather!
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Rough draft
Critiques
Rula
2 months 3 weeks ago
Nice take Clentin
Of the contest.
Always appreciate your participation indeed.
Clentin Martin
2 months 3 weeks ago
Thank you! Always trying!
Thank you! Always trying!
Mark
3 weeks 2 days ago
Hiya Clentin
This poem about Mother Nature fooling us once again rolls nice up to the mother pulling plants line. You should rethink that line and maybe even do without it. The poem continues nicely after that line. Do your best at some sort of rhyming,
See ya,
Mark
Clentin Martin
3 weeks 1 day ago
Thank you
Thank you
Clentin Martin
3 weeks 1 day ago
Thank you
Thank you
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