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Nov 29, 2025
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Japanese Dumplings
electronic cash
economic falsity
emaginary!
About This Poem
Last Few Words: maybe just invented a new word? I don't really consider this true haiku, so classed it as structured western, just another hack on an established form...sorta like football...
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
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