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Nov 08, 2025
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CHICKEN FLOP PHOOEY
The scotus is keen to save face
'cuz their leaning's a gleaming disgrace
the capitulant class
eating drumpfsticks'n ass
like they're masking a sensitive case!
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Not super happy with the title on this one. I think it's cute but thought it should relate more to the text in the poem....more brain squeezing...
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
John Leslie O'Kelley
5 months 1 week ago
Chicken floop phooey!
This is cultural language which I would like to understand, please write back and explain a bit more! Thanks Leslie.