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Nov 03, 2025
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SCHMUCK L'ORANGE
In China, they like to eat duck
and donald, the imbecile schmuck
is now on the menus
of all the best venues
but this time his quack is a cluck!
About This Poem
Last Few Words: I was on the fence with this title or "cluck l'orange". Any input is appreciated!
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Geezer
5 months 2 weeks ago
I think...
I get it! Donald is a chicken! He has been served on the Chinese menu! ~ Geez.
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Candlewitch
5 months 2 weeks ago
Hello,
I like the poem, it is very clever. To my way of thinking, you chose correctly for the title.
sincerely, Cat