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Triskelion
Triskelion
Nov 02, 2025 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

KOREAN KING KON (language)

The crown for the clown's fuckin' fake
it's a fuckery frame for a flake
a fuck of disgrace
in the fake fucker's face
a fake for a fake for fuck's sake!

About This Poem

Last Few Words: I tried a tongue-twister, but thiis one uses more of the "voiceless labiodental fricative" sound. Could I call it a "frickafumbler"? Anyway, apologies for the f words!

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
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What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
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Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Country/Region: Lake Simcoe Canada

Favorite Poets: Poe, Frost, E.B. Browning, Theodor Seuss Geisel,

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