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Bikers

From the back seat of our car she follows
motorcyclists with her eyes, mouthing words
of admiration, or looking down her nose at those
deemed too old and those who have grown
too gross. She tries to capture on her phone
their violent roar and velocity
in which she hears music and poetry.
A posse of bikes like a flock of birds
arrowing a path to anywhere else;
she’ll get no closer to black leather boys,
their fleeting and masked, inscrutable selves
promising danger beyond her belief.
She will never find what lies underneath
the gleaming jackets and the moon-shaped heads;
they are creatures to be wondered at,
stared upon from behind a glass.

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - draft

About the Author

Country/Region: England

Favorite Poets: John Cooper Clarke , Fleur Adcock , Carol Anne Duffy , Derek Mahon

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Lavender

Lavender

5 months 2 weeks ago

Bikers

Hello, Ray,

Daughter?  Granddaughter?  I can picture the narrator in the driver's seat glancing in the rear view mirror, observing her face and reaction.  This poem is so much more about her innocence and curiosity than bikers - and I really love that approach.  This has such a subtle tenderness to it...

Thank you,

L

R

Ray Miller

5 months 2 weeks ago

Bikers

Thanks, Lavender. It's about our youngest daughter, the only one still at home. She's prone to obsessions, though this one seems to have passed now.