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Oct 31, 2025
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HUFF'N'PUFF EXPRESS
he's pretending he made a sweet deal
mo' like beat; now he's ready to kneel
while Xi, with a smile
had he, all the while
while he, had the guile to steal
heh,
(now he needs to act tough
so he'll blow up some stuff
with a huff and puff full of fluff)
About This Poem
Last Few Words: I think this is how apostrophes are used to differentiate between two people, using the same pronoun. Could you follow the logic? Feedback is appreciated, of course.
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
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How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Candlewitch
5 months 2 weeks ago
Excellent title!
I found this poem easy to follow...when read out loud it flows and tickles the tongue (not to mention the brain!) I admire how it delivers Trump as a major douche bag! like a perfectly framed picture. But I think you are being too kind...
always, Cat