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Oct 27, 2025
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MAGAT IN CHIEF
he went for a brain MRI
no surprise, he's the brain of a fly
when asked how it was
he replied with a buzz
...since July, it's his only reply
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Flies accumulate wherever there's deep shit. Just not sure if a brain MRI is a thing. Hm.
Style/Type: Structured: Western
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Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Geezer
5 months 3 weeks ago
Funny shit...
I suppose that it will attract funny flies. ~ LMAO ~ Geez.
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