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Why Does the Mallard Love the Rain?
I listen as it runs along the gutters
and through the downspouts -
rain,
on its musical journey
from an ominous cloud line
to an ever-succulent Earth below.
It creates small pools of murky water,
gathers near beds of geraniums and lilac bushes,
then settles in to rest beneath the forgotten sun.
I wonder why rain falls with such intent?
Why it can neither be held back,
nor suddenly appear by need nor prayer.
I wonder why it's defiant
through drought,
yet flagrant through flood.
And then, there is the Mallard -
a simple soul who gleans peace from the rain
and seems to wonder about nothing at all.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Sen99
6 months ago
Precipitation
Hello Lavender
You portray the rain in a lyrical way a reflection on nature and sound of water,
Like the stanzas with "I wonder * asking more interesting questions about prayer, drought and flood. The image of the mallard gives a amusing end to this lovely poem,
Nicely scribed and shared
S
Lavender
6 months ago
Hello, Sen,
Mallards in the pouring rain - they seem to love it! No worries or cares.
Thank you for reading!
L