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Oct 17, 2025
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TRANZUELA TRICK
He's picking on poor Venezuela
'cause a prostitute trans named Consuela
had quipped at his dick
when he flipped for a trick
she said, "shit, that is sick genetalia!"
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Not much to rhyme with Venezuela, but I think that's close enough for fun. Cheers!
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Direction:
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How was my language use?
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Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Geezer
6 months ago
Trisky, my boy...
one simply doesn't make fun of the man's little... hands, that's it, hands! LoL ~ Geez.