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Oct 05, 2025
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THE FARMHAND OUT
The farmers are angry as fuck
being stabbed in the back for a buck
but he'll wax them all off
with the taxes he scoffed
yeah, the boss is a communist schmuck
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Is it speculation or just another conspiracy theory? There aren't too many that would know for sure!
Style/Type: Structured: Western
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Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Geezer
6 months 2 weeks ago
The limerick is good but…
The limerick is good but leaving the name of the "Boss" out, almost made me chastise you for a lapse of quantity in the farmers; either they are, or he is.
It should be "but****** will wax them all off..." ~ Geez.
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