School Days

This is a true lesson for every teacher. Kindness/humanity is absolutely a must trait in teachers who want to raise a generation. It's not about learning and teaching subjects, but also raising a Man .

If I may suggest, the opening lines.feel a bit awkward for me

I suggest something like

Everytime I remember Sister Marie Claire

 I feel the chill through my spine and the hair.

Jut for a tighter rhythm

Thank you for sharing 

button stuck? I suggest that your piece could use a little bit of a trim in some lines.

Hello, Clentin,

I, too, feel a chill when I think of some of the nuns I had as teachers when I was young.  Feisty women covered by their habits from head to toe, the only body parts showing - their hands and faces.  Maybe they were a bit up-tight because they were uncomfortable?  

Anyhoo, your poem brought back those "School Days" for me.

Thank you,

L