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Jun 03, 2025
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NEW RAYS
NEW RAYS
A kiss and a dream
injured
in the corners of the night forgotten
Colorful golden chrysalides
silky
confused phosphoresis, prisoners
The streets naked
the eyes can not escape
I'm looking for light
Angelic creatures with braided hair
at the end of pleasure of the divine bodies
bathed
On the outline of the circle
New rays
in the swan the white ones
wings are born
at the beginning of the day
— Eftichia1, Jun 03, 2025
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Style/Type: Free verse
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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neopoet
1 year ago
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kowque
1 year ago
You had me at braided
The usage of words here is so clever.