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May 31, 2025
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This side ...this side..this side....
We have a girl child,this side
Who killed herself,this side
Because bullies,this side
Posted her nudies online,this side
Her family is still crying,this side
The loss of life,this side
For a few laughs, this side
Why the brutality,this side?
When did we lose our humanity,this side?
About This Poem
Last Few Words: New article came out about the latest victim of cyber bullying. Breaks my heart.
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
neopoet
10 months 3 weeks ago
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John Leslie O'Kelley
10 months 3 weeks ago
Koqwue
I feel the anger and desperation. I don't understand why AI won't make a comment. Keep putting your feelings on the website. It's good for everyone here at Neo!
kowque
10 months 3 weeks ago
Im too angry these days
Im going to post something nice soon.
Thank for taking the time to always be kind
Lavender
10 months 3 weeks ago
This Side
Hello, Koki,
You've said so much with this. Sometimes, poetry should be angry...
Thank you,
Lx
kowque
10 months 3 weeks ago
Lol im serious....im going to post something nice
Not sure when,but it will be as beautiful as the Lavender in my garden. That stays a persistent colour despite the fact that its cold here and we dont have water ;)
Lavender
10 months 3 weeks ago
I look forward...
to reading!
L
Candlewitch
10 months 2 weeks ago
this side...
sweet koki,
keep on writing keep on venting your feelings. we will be here to read your words!
(I would be angry too!)
xxx Cat
kowque
10 months 2 weeks ago
My fellow sweet Cat Lady
Thank you for stopping by.
Unca Fez
10 months 2 weeks ago
Having Been...
Having been the victim of bullying before there was a cyber, I can see how social media can amplify the intensity and devestation. Children can be so cruel and, unfortunately, that cruelty carries over into adulthood, especially on social media. I don't know if our society can ever recover. Perhaps with some people writing about it and calling it what it is, maybe we can save ourselves.
Steve
kowque
10 months 2 weeks ago
I was also bullied before social media
But, then experienced a situation where my ex-husband threatened to post intimate photos of me online. I immediately contcated a lawyer and he was sent a very stern "cease and desist" letter. I was fortunate to have been able to stand up for myself BEFORE anything happened. But, this poem reads so angry because I literally had a panic attack for what felt like the longest moment of that day. Thank you for the comment Steve.