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Apr 22, 2025
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Your Smile, the Third Star
In my cup, three
Stars have fallen:
My fellow's verse,
A wisdom I've just learnt,
And your smile.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Candlewitch
12 months ago
Dearest Rula,
This is wonderful! What lovely thoughts you have!
love, Candle
Rula
12 months ago
Dearest Candle
I think it's fair to say that most of my "lovely" thoughts are the inspiration of some wonderful friends alike you
It's a haven for me and my thoughts.
Much appreciate it!
Candlewitch
12 months ago
many smiles :) :) :)
many smiles :) :) :)
much love, Candle
Ruby Lord
12 months ago
Hi Rula, your poem is
Hi Rula, your poem is luminous and fleeting. Its restraint suits it perfectly. Ruby xx
Rula
12 months ago
Hello Ruby
So glad to know that this short poem is worthy to visit.
Your comment is highly appreciated as ever.
Thank you so much!
Frederick Kesner
12 months ago
Makes me feel like I’m
Makes me feel like I’m reading Kahlil Gibran again. Such exquisite beauty and meaning wedded in brief lines. Nothing overstated, nothing wasted; everything as it should be. :)
Candlewitch
12 months ago
c b!
I should have guessed!!!
you are K. Gibran fan, too!
Frederick Kesner
11 months 4 weeks ago
Cat, I was thinking no one
Cat, I was thinking no one would really catch on but it does take one to know one! It’s quite the blessing to have been given the benefit of a variety of poetic expressions. Grateful :)