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Jan 31, 2025
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Little Criminals
My daydreams are like clumsy little thieves
poking about for something of value.
Have at it you rascals!
I have some time, and no reason
to put locks on the door.
— Michael Anthony, Jan 31, 2025
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About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Critiques
Lavender
1 year 4 months ago
Little Criminals
Hello, Michael,
Too rich! :) My daydreams wear rose-colored glasses and pretend the world is full of rainbows and unicorns. I feel just the opposite - reality is thieving me of my daydreams.
Very nice!
L
Michael Anthony
1 year 4 months ago
I hear you about that damn
I hear you about that damn thief - same here sometimes.
Best