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Dec 18, 2024
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Father
I kept trying to traverse a chasm before me,
seeking a presence I longed for, but never offered
on a barren range dotted by clouds in the distance.
It took me some time to realize
there were distances that couldn’t be reached
by trying to get there.
— Michael Anthony, Dec 18, 2024
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About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Critiques
Ruby Lord
1 year 5 months ago
Powerful
I've read this a few times now. Your words, every one making this count. I think this is perfect as it is. You should be very pleased with this. Ruby xxx :)
Michael Anthony
1 year 5 months ago
Thank you RL. Appreciate the
Thank you RL. Appreciate the visit and your thoughts on this piece - very kind.
Best
Lavender
1 year 5 months ago
Father
Hello, Michael,
I agree - perfect.
Thank you,
L