The Taoist

“Where do people go when they’re gone?”, asked Piglet.

“I think they prefer to live in here.”, Pooh pointed to his heart.

“Important to have a big one so they have plenty of room.”, offered Piglet.

“Absolutely!”, Pooh replied.

— Michael Anthony, Oct 22, 2024

Review Request Direction: How does this theme appeal to you?

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Polished draft

Region, Country: San Francisco Bay Area - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Bukowski, Billy Collins, Ted Kooser, Haiku & Harvey Kurtzman (a visual poet, of sorts)

1 year 9 months ago

and Bravo! I love it... Pooh and Piglet are on top of it.. !

*hugs, Cat

1 year 9 months ago

Thanks Cat. Pooh and Piglet def know what's up!

Cheers

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