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Apr 22, 2011
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haiku III
The stars are the eyes,
the universe is watching
While you watch it move
— Eduardo Cruz, Apr 22, 2011
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Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
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mand
15 years 1 month ago
Hi Eddies
Another good one.
Love Mand xxxxx
Eduardo Cruz
15 years 1 month ago
Mand
Thank you so much! ooooo
Eduardo Cruz
15 years 1 month ago
rosi just remember
5 - 7 - 5
17 syllaibles it's that easy.
the charchters must reflex the end thought