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May 18, 2023
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This poem is part of the challenge:
May 2023 Challenge Sleep Talk From My Lover Winner
Challenge Sweet Talk from My Lover. Short and Sweet.
Each night before I fall asleep
I feel her breath caress my cheek,
I feel her hair like softest dew
Her scented flesh that wakes anew
Feelings strong I can't ignore
Until, that is, she starts to snore.
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neopoet
2 years 11 months ago
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Geezer
2 years 11 months ago
And after?...
I would love you see this one continued.
~ Geez.
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Alex Tanner
2 years 11 months ago
Damn
Damn you Geez. You have given me food for thought, I'll see what I can do. Alex
Geezer
2 years 11 months ago
Just thought...
that it could be really funny to have her wake up with the dog next to her snoring away or how you spent the night on the couch, maybe... Well, you get the idea. ~ Geez.
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Ruby Lord
2 years 11 months ago
Great punchline, made me
Great punchline, made me giggle. Ruby :)
Alex Tanner
2 years 11 months ago
Thank you
Thank you Ruby. Geezer suggested expanding it but I can't think of anything suitable. I have tried writing more, but nothing seems to work. Reckon I'll leave it as it is. Alex.
Obadiah Grey
2 years 11 months ago
Hee Hee, Got me!! Obi.
Hee Hee, Got me!!
Obi.
Alex Tanner
2 years 11 months ago
Goodie!
Glad I did Obi. Geezer suggested expanding it but I can't think of anything suitable. I have tried writing more, but nothing seems to work. Reckon I'll leave it as it is. Alex.
RoseBlack
2 years 10 months ago
This
gave me a much needed laugh. I agree with Geez, what happened after?