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Feb 27, 2023
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Wicked
Tempter
Wicked waters
Drag me down underneath
Moral compass shattered wholely
Charmer
— RoseBlack, Feb 27, 2023
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About This Poem
Last Few Words: Cinquain
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Critiques
Geezer
3 years 3 months ago
Hmmmm...
Thoughts alone, do not make for sins.
I guess that moral compasses, are sometimes affected by magnetic personalities.
A nicely done Cinquain. ~ Geez.
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RoseBlack
3 years 3 months ago
Truth
Sometimes those magnets temporarily erase all that is right and wrong and leave desire, longing and a need to be loved. Thank you for the read and comment.
Lavender
3 years 3 months ago
Wicked
Hi, Carrie,
Really like this!
Thank you,
L
RoseBlack
3 years 3 months ago
Thank you
Cinquain is my new favorite! I'm going to explore some other styles soon.