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Apr 03, 2011
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Crocus Buds
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crocus buds burst forth
peep and poke through dunes of white
winter bows to spring
when the sun begins to shine again
life's vital truths made clear at road's end
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About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Eduardo Cruz
15 years ago
Fred
there is nothing like a fresh start in life.
an there is no better metaphor than the seasons
I like this short and to the point write
respect to you!
Eddie
Frederick Kesner
15 years ago
Thanks Eddie
sorry for the late response. I have been struggling to recuperate from a rather tedious bout with the flu. Obviously a new strain has reared its head this season. The autumn over here has graced us with inclement weather.
scribbler
15 years ago
hi
This short write with Haiku start works well..................stan
Frederick Kesner
15 years ago
thanks stan
glad to know it worked well. Cheers, CB