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Mar 29, 2011
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Inward Reasons
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On a hand-hewn pedestal
imagination coalesced;
on milk-white face alight
eyes sparkle with a liquid flame.
Some build ivory towers,
these hands raw from driven labour,
on scratched cheeks a stricken eye
ransoms a sculpted orphan dream.
Across time and Middle Sea
another calloused hand chiselled;
laughter on a pine-white face
resurrected an ailing heart.
Some can only imagine
what others have without trying;
when vicarious journeys fail,
reality's block they assail.
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About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
magics02
15 years ago
Sigh
Wow Crypt I have to come back to read this again and it is about Grandmother, am I correct? Love to you and stay strong
Mona
Frederick Kesner
15 years ago
This one is about
the inner processes of creativity within artists. It picks up from Pygmalion and Geppetto as a springboard for emotion.