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Love and Lust On The Face Of a Man
Love and Lust On The Face Of a Man
Love is the look on a Fathers face
When he is seeing his first child
Wrapped in a swaddling blanket
In the loving arms of an caring nurse
Love is the look on a Mothers face
When she hears her child’s first cries
Still attached to her umbilical cord pink and wrinkly
In the gentle hands of a kind doctor
Lust is the look on the face of a man
That sees his neighbor’s wife sun bathing
In the front yard of their country home
On a hot spring day at noontime
Lust is the look on the face of a female
any ideas?……………………….
So if you are looking for love and lust
Just look on the face of a man or woman and you will find it
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Ian you are so inspiring this reminded me of a neighbor a few years ago who's wife was sun bathing by the road on a towel in fron of their home. he got a call came home and talk her they went in their small trailer. that same week they moved. he was military. lol
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
raj
15 years 1 month ago
Dear Barbara
i liked this take on love n lust reflecting through the eyes of a man....would be nice if you add feminine reflections .....
Barbara Writes
15 years 1 month ago
okay
Ian gave me this take on love and lust lol. As for a feminine reflections, I haven't gone their since it may get my overly sinsitive conscience in trouble lol. I will see what I can come up with lol.
Glad you like the take.
raj
15 years 1 month ago
Ok..i will look forward to
Ok..i will look forward to read it as and when you come up with it...
Barbara Writes
15 years ago
Ok
Will do. Thinking about it now.