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Jun 28, 2022
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Too Young
On my eighteenth birthday,
I was blue and depressed.
Didn’t want to grow up.
With childhood I was impressed.
Now in my fortieth summer
The world really amazes me,
I still think and wonder
What yet to do and be.
I am still curious like a child
With thoughts and actions rather wild,
I hate to do what I am told.
Nothing is what time means to me,
I still don’t want grown up to be.
I’m just too young to be old.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Jackweb
3 years 9 months ago
Hello!
Juvenile delinquency refers to the failure of the children and youth to meet certain obligations expected of them by the society in which they live.
|Jack W. Stanley
3 years 9 months ago
Hello Onyinyechi
That is correct. Every imposed obligation is a possible path to revolt.
Jackweb
3 years 9 months ago
Yeah!
Exactly Jack W.
Rosewood Apothecary
3 years 9 months ago
43 year old child here
Great poem. Awesome subject. Your comment however…striking!
“Every imposed obligation is a possible path to revolt.“
That’s poetic as ever!
Tim
|Jack W. Stanley
3 years 9 months ago
Hello Tim,
Many thanks for your comment.
Cheers,
Jack
Candlewitch
3 years 9 months ago
LOL!
have you been reading my mind? LOL!
*always, Cat & eddy styx
*
|Jack W. Stanley
3 years 9 months ago
Hello Cat & eddy ;-)
It is quite possible.