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THE LOVE OF PETS

at least the dog
also has a friend
he needs to look after
both mutually

so I'm equally happy
with all my pets who lived with me
they're as human
if not more lovable
dear poets

— lovedly, May 12, 2022

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Critiques

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

4 years ago

dear lovedly,

it is so very true what you have said about pets. they become our children and family. I know mine have. intelligent and loving, too!

*hugs, Cat >{^*;*^}<

lovedly

lovedly

4 years ago

high

send me a big ball
I'd kick it back
no teeth left to bite
any ball
lol haha
thanks
friendly poet Ray

Mr joghe

Mr joghe

4 years ago

You really show the

You really show the relationship that exists between the pet and you in the line 2 stanza 2.
I like the poem.