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May 12, 2022
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THE LOVE OF PETS
at least the dog
also has a friend
he needs to look after
both mutually
so I'm equally happy
with all my pets who lived with me
they're as human
if not more lovable
dear poets
— lovedly, May 12, 2022
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About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Critiques
Candlewitch
4 years ago
dear lovedly,
it is so very true what you have said about pets. they become our children and family. I know mine have. intelligent and loving, too!
*hugs, Cat >{^*;*^}<
lovedly
4 years ago
Am I not lucky
at my age
now all are treating me
as the third pet
haha lol
Candlewitch
4 years ago
it is true...
you are loved.
*smiles, Cat
Ray Whitaker
4 years ago
I've never lost a dog that I wasn't affected
Dogs are my friends. Had one since I was a kid. got one now.
Lovedly, I'd make you into a pet, but you don't fetch and bring back the ball.... laughing
lovedly
4 years ago
high
send me a big ball
I'd kick it back
no teeth left to bite
any ball
lol haha
thanks
friendly poet Ray
Mr joghe
4 years ago
You really show the
You really show the relationship that exists between the pet and you in the line 2 stanza 2.
I like the poem.