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May 01, 2022
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THEY LAST
Those who care to reach till the last
— lovedly, May 01, 2022
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About This Poem
Last Few Words: BULLET POEM EACH WORD COUNTS
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Critiques
Candlewitch
4 years 1 month ago
dear lovedly,
this is a wonderful thought for the day!
*hugs, Cat
lovedly
4 years 1 month ago
Thank you Cats
First sunny Sunday
they told me
all are asleep
maintain silence
hence a liner only
one bullet
lol
Geezer
4 years 1 month ago
Reaching...
for the stars, holding on to the moon for support. ~ Geez.
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lovedly
4 years 1 month ago
great Geezzzzzzzzzzzzzz
yes the moon is a good base
many stars within space
lol