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Apr 17, 2022
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WIND.
Wind
Sometimes there
Messing up my hair
But I don't care
Places you've been
Things you've seen
You sure are pleasing
On hot summer days
Loose leaves dancing
Follow me along my way
Some people curse you
But I think you're o.k.
— Christopher Stuart, Apr 17, 2022
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Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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c lynn brooks
4 years 1 month ago
Christopher
What a delightful little poem this is. It is light and airy(pardon the pun)
Christopher Stuart
4 years 1 month ago
WIND
Thanks Lynn. I have had it for about 30 years but never done anything with it.