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Mar 21, 2011
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Kaskade
bite thick this flesh
arc bright the flash
of blade
where frost steams
beneath springs
rapture
and bird dark rain
winds cascade
life for buried seed
— Esker, Mar 21, 2011
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Roscoe Lane
15 years 4 months ago
I'm thinking,
I'm thinking this is rebirth we're reading about, if not still well put together.I love reading your poems , though i may not always understand. I love that line , where frost steams beneath springs rapture. Great write again. Regards Roscoe..
lou
15 years 4 months ago
Esker
I just love your use of the English language. I can find no fault.
love lou
Esker
15 years 4 months ago
loving people seems difficult
but the language is something one can
its always been a passion and its somewhat
more forgiving
Ive lived more in books then I have in life
how absurd sometimes
but Im happy with poetry
and its writes
it keeps me moving in my day
gets me away from the room
and I fall into a routine
of arriving here
and leaving
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