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Jan 02, 2022
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Should you forget me REFORCED EDIT
Should you forget me
Never mind
Did I ever know you
The wind takes me
here and there
where were you
CHORUS
Should you forget me
wind takes me
here and there
where were you
In search of a fresher one
than me
never mind just forget me
I shall chase another speedier wind would you care to join in the flood too
never mind we shall sing the chorus too
I and you
sorry
you and I
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Should you forget me
Never mind
Did I ever know you
The wind takes me
here and there
where were you
CHORUS
Should you forget me
wind takes me
here and there
where were you
— lovedly, Jan 02, 2022
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About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Critiques
Triskelion
4 years 5 months ago
I'd like to see..
..another stanza ending with
"Where you are"
The wind is one of a true poet's muses. It is also my favourite way to travel.
Thomas
lovedly
4 years 5 months ago
cdn poet friend
just add on i will include not much of a musician i am
Triskelion
4 years 5 months ago
Okay
I apologize.
Thomas
lovedly
4 years 5 months ago
Thomas who
see edit as requested
lovedly
4 years 5 months ago
ok
tomorrow I will
today's one free poem
is over
ASK GEE
Why is jess controlling us still
Jackweb
4 years 5 months ago
This is enjambment
The poem has no interruptions of any punctuation mark. As I read aloud the tone in the poem drops unfinished lines. In the poem there is rhetorical question aboud. In many cases it may be intended to start a discourse, or as a means of displaying or emphasize the speaker's opinion on topic.