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Which am I...~~~By Lovedly please me

Doctor Jekyll~~~ Mr Hyde
two in one body reside
inside
one for day as doc
the other for night
knock knock

believe me I am the real
loved
then
lovedone
then
lovedly
then
Rosy me

Now I'm done
Someone help me
who am I can you tell me
a sole imagery in eternity
or infinity
least of all in oblivion

if this poem gets posted
as from Lovedly
I am then the real one
Loved /Lovedly
ROSE flower one

Some one resolve
the mystery for me .

Some think I am young
others feel I need now
to RIP

what is your opinion
will you tell me
Paul Gee or Stan
anyone

About This Poem

Last Few Words: This poem is from Lovedly real one

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ETERNITY AND INFINITY

Favorite Poets: About me: , ''A rose bud also withers away, but rarely dies as in library books, they after life stay so would Lovedly, may...'', once Loved, now Lovedly, PERIOD OVER 15 YEARS , may be the longest, ''unknown poet'', This account is a duplicate account of lovedly please search lovedly to read this user's poetry.

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Comments

|Triskelion

|Triskelion

4 years 10 months ago

I am not

sure who you are, but your riddle based poem is really refreshing.

Thomas

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ROSYME

4 years 10 months ago

Gee

why a DOT ONLY

Geezer

Geezer

4 years 10 months ago

A mistake...

The comment was for someone else. For you, the name is not important, it is the man behind the scene! ~ Geez.
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Ray Whitaker

Ray Whitaker

4 years 10 months ago

So like Lovedly

So much. Are we sure he didn’t ghostwrite this?

The piece remiinds me of “Doctor Jimmy and Mr Jim” and some the duality in life.

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ROSYME

4 years 10 months ago

Thanks Mark

kindness always and ever pays
there's problem these days

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ROSYME

4 years 10 months ago

To all

I wait and see
at sea