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Apr 08, 2021
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WHAT HAS HAPPENED
NO MOVEMENT TODAY
ITS a very sunny day
Why not come and play
Let's make hay
what do you all say
Silence disturbs
wonder the world is caught
in some kinda
tsunami
— lovedly, Apr 08, 2021
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About This Poem
Last Few Words: Silence is like a mourning morning
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Critiques
Geezer
5 years 2 months ago
Yes, there is...
a sudden silence! Sometimes, I feel it when there is something of great importance about to happen or in the aftermath of a calamity. Hmmm... ~ Geez.
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lovedly
5 years 1 month ago
yes
but why was Neopoet's resting for hours
it unnerved me
Gee
O what a relief