Time

Mystery in a circle of sixty,
You are man’s greatest obsession.
In unseen track you fly,
Lifting light and letting heavy crawl.
Undoubtedly present in every century,
In seconds, minutes and hours,
You turn today to yesterday and tomorrow to now.

— I_am_Oriii, Jan 27, 2021

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: North Central Nigeria, NGA

Critiques

Lavender

5 years 4 months ago

Time

Hello, Oriii,
What a stunning piece. Mysterious and thoughtful, but so obvious and significant. Really like this.
Thank you!
L

Favour Ori Umeh

5 years 4 months ago

Thank you Lavender I really

Thank you Lavender I really appreciate your thought

Favour Ori Umeh

5 years 4 months ago

Thank you Teddy. I'm excited

Thank you Teddy. I'm excited you find it stunning.

chima ononogbu

5 years 4 months ago

Beautiful piece Ori

The piece takes one deep into self. So nice. Thanks.

Favour Ori Umeh

5 years 3 months ago

I appreciate

Thank you so much for your thought and advice I do appreciate

Geezer

5 years 4 months ago

I like...

your observations on time! I especially enjoyed: "Mystery in a circle of sixty." It sounds so "mysterious!" ~ Geezer.
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Favour Ori Umeh

5 years 3 months ago

Thanks

Thank you Geezer I am glad u find the poem catchy and mysterious

Favour Ori Umeh

5 years ago

Wow I'm so glad you thought

Wow I'm so glad you thought of that exceptional movie LUCY while reading my piece... Thank you