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lovedly

Dec 21, 2020 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

MERRY XMAS neos all

When I come
my brains
become dumb

come mommy
where are thee
in the wildest
wilderness
looking out for me

Wait
I may soon
be coming
NUDELY
so you can recognize me
quite easily

longingly
me

your then small
sonny

now wow
me

mommy will ye

I'm coming
gleefully

mommyyeeeeeeeeeeeee

— lovedly, Dec 21, 2020

About This Poem

Last Few Words: EACH XMAS IS DIFFERENT

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Critiques

5 years 5 months ago

If I didn't...

think that you had already lost your marbles, Lovedly; I would say that you have now done so. LoL I'm guessing that if you had been female, the ending would have been; Daddyeeeeee? ~ Geez.
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5 years 5 months ago

lol lol now i can say

Daddyeeeeeellleeee
u b geeeeeeellillyyyeeeee
lolllyyyyyylie