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Apr 13, 2020
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Heaven’s Stain
Beauty lies, and so it is underneath this skin where the eyes of winter green, and buttered chin are nursed of heaven’s stain. This love lives on in the darkness and the light. In the coolness of the night, and radical tempermant of the day…then for once, whence inside the head the mind may run wild, inviting the angels to stay. Once in a lifetime, love is forgiving. And beauty is its nemesis. This is where I am obliged to indulge on the same road where truth knows folly. And, happenstance is familiar with seduction.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Thank you!
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction: How does this theme appeal to you?
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Comments
Geezer
5 years 6 months ago
The format...
leaves something to be desired. It makes it difficult to read and understanding even more so. ~ Geezer.
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Gracy
5 years 6 months ago
Hi, I agree with Geezer. It's
Hi, I agree with Geezer. It's poetical prose, of course, but it's best to state that for other's to know. Good topic, though. Welcome to Neopoet.