Owl Haiku

the owl's ribbed coo
like feathered hands, massaging
my taut, anxious soul

— gregwa8, Sep 30, 2018

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Maryland, USA

Critiques

Shadowdancer3349

7 years 8 months ago

Greg

Spot on nicely done

gregwa8