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Sep 13, 2018
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I feel ...do you too
I feel dry
nothing left to try
time to
say
goodbye
don't ever be shy
and
ask me not why
let time fly by
the world will also
time to part comes too
for anyone including me and you
still I say and ask of you
How do you do
who!
— lovedly, Sep 13, 2018
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About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Rough draft
Critiques
Rula
7 years 10 months ago
Hello Lovedly
A normal feeling we might get some day(s).
I don't think you need the last "who"
Or do you? :)
lovedly
7 years 10 months ago
yeah abs right
I suppose so
we all are human
and
aged poets of neo
Shadowdancer3349
7 years 10 months ago
lovedly
interesting use of rhyme but still got your point across
lovedly
7 years 10 months ago
thanks a lot
Shadowdancer for your maiden comments
would love more
let peace be the world
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