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Jun 05, 2018
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Conflict Culture:
Fighting a war to bring about our peace
Liquidating lives for our existence
Detaining prisoners for our release
Destroying their world for our sure presence
Divinely intended and intentioned
We seek ownership over our birthright
Our viewpoint is rational and reasoned
We are the vanguard of historic right
— OriginalRhyku, Jun 05, 2018
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About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Critiques
gregwa8
8 years ago
love the irony of this piece.
love the irony of this piece.
OriginalRhyku
8 years ago
Greg
Thank your for your comment of mettle
OriginalRhyku
8 years ago
Mark
Good to hear from you after some time. The good news is a majority of the general public in many nations are averse to conflict. The bad news is that some right wing leaders in various regions are fanning the flames of fear and the military-industrial complex wants to try out their latest and greatest toys. Killing is big business and they literally make a killing.
raj
8 years ago
I agree with the comment of
I agree with the comment of Greg...good ironic verses...
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OriginalRhyku
8 years ago
Raj
thanks for your feedback.