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faerybeki
faerybeki
Feb 09, 2011 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Angry Senryu

I'm feeling angry
for no apparent reason
so please, fuck right off

— faerybeki, Feb 09, 2011

About This Poem

Last Few Words: oh dear I am in a bad mood ;) rrraaaaaarrrr got to let it out somewhere though eh? hoping to transform it into joy eventually :)

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: GBR

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Critiques

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raj

15 years 4 months ago

Dear Beki..

i liked the forthrightness of this haiku...hitting the nail right on its head....

much love..

faerybeki

faerybeki

15 years 4 months ago

lol :) and thanks for

lol :) and thanks for pointing that out, I did wonder :) title changed ,you can come out from behind the sofa now, much love Beki xxx

K

Kailashana2

15 years 4 months ago

Well I say *uck you

Well I say *uck you
and your little doggie too,
love, the wicked witch

Is this a senyru or a haiku?

Oh, something wicked this way comes and it's heading straight for you: A BAD POEM!
Batten down the hatches! Bring out the cruicifix, holy water and the picture post cards,
it's time for an exorcism. ;-)

~A

S

scribbler

15 years 4 months ago

lol

better pissed off than pissed on lol...................scribbler

Race_9togo

Race_9togo

15 years 3 months ago

Beki

LMAO

"so, please, fuck right off!"
I love this line.

Sweet Lady, be angry more often, this is worth it!

LOL