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Infant Sorrow by William Blake (Imagery WS)

My mother groaned, my father wept:
Into the dangerous world I leapt,
Helpless, naked, piping loud,
Like a fiend hid in a cloud.

Struggling in my father's hands,
Striving against my swaddling-bands,
Bound and weary, I thought best
To sulk upon my mother's breast.

— Rula, Jul 13, 2017

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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and , Poets are humanity when the world lose it.

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scribbler

8 years 10 months ago

Hi Rula

An excellent short poem I'd never read. Should be a good one for shop purposes also

John Leslie O'Kelley

John Leslie O'Kelley

5 months 4 weeks ago

Rula

At the cradle of existence we each begin with a father and a mother, with no protection except our own mind for what will happen next. I do love your poetry!