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Dec 24, 2016
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Puter
I frequently use the word 'puter as an abbreviation for computer. Tonight someone, hearing it for the first time said they thought I was saying something rude. Which prompted this.
Puter pudenda
pubicly portentous
publicly portraited,
parole violated.
There was a young man whose new 'puter
could not have been any way cuter
but lacking pudenda
or pubic addenda
he just couldn't manage to root her
— weirdelf, Dec 24, 2016
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Last Few Words: I have never before ticked- "Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly) " So I thought I would just for the craic. Say what you fucking like.
Review Request Intensity: Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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weirdelf
9 years 5 months ago
Not even going to pull me up
on the highly suspect 'portraited'?