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greeneyes

Jan 27, 2011 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Lovers Spat

Here comes the thunder
Zeus is angry with his bride
Hera is crying

— greeneyes, Jan 27, 2011

About This Poem

Last Few Words: This is an old one i changed a little

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Not actively editing

About the Author

Country/Region: Colorado Springs Colorado

Favorite Poets: I love Dr. Suess! He is my favorite, I would love to write for children.

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Critiques

15 years 4 months ago

I love Greek mythology. As

I love Greek mythology. As far as your book goes, i have it and love it!

S

15 years 4 months ago

spat

just enough mention of nature to be a Haiku with enough other to be of interest. My comment is longer than your poem lol..............scribbler

15 years 4 months ago

There is some telepathy that seems to work

I wrote a song for you
some two months ago
where did you go,
none read it
so today from the blog ,
you know
i resurfaced it for you
now please read it
kindly do so

15 years 4 months ago

Dear Elizabeth,

What can I say? It is a clever little poem. I, too, love mythology! I hope you are doing well. It has been what feels like a very long, cold, winter.

love, Cat

15 years 4 months ago

I like,

I like it, and i hope those emerald eyes are still shining. Love Roscoe..

15 years 4 months ago

I like it too, clever little

I like it too, clever little haiku, much love Beki xxx