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Mar 24, 2016
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Spring (Tanka)
a gypsy spirit
speaking Bohemian language
are the wild daisies
When the season is over
the phase is caged in a vase
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Barbara Writes
10 years 1 month ago
Rula
Beautiful thanks for jumping in and bringing in the spring with us at eternal renga. Will you please go to your edit and put this in the "bring in the spring workshop". I'll have you in the participants box momentarily
raj
10 years 1 month ago
I liked this Rula, especially
I liked this Rula, especially the Bohemian touch which made this unique...
Regards,
Rula
10 years ago
Thank you raj
For the encouraging words. Highly appreciate it.
Rula
10 years ago
Thank you Barbara
for adding me and the nice comment.
Much appreciate it dear.
Hope all is well with you.
Barbara Writes
10 years ago
I'm better
My MS in remission
This broken tooth has me miserable
Don't know if i will ever get it fixed
Don't have the money
Do thus I suffer until it move on
For another day
lovedly
10 years 1 month ago
wonderful
coming Rula from you
kindly read mine too
not much a do to
not only all about spring to say
but Rula twill be nice coming my way
Rula
10 years ago
hello loved
And many thanks for the time and the nice words
alidzain
10 years ago
Salam, Rula
Yes! I've been waiting for you to join the workshop, sis. Can't remember the last time you have written a tanka here.
Alid
Rula
10 years ago
Thank you
Khalid. I think this is my first or second one.
Esker
10 years ago
this is cool~!
excellent work!
dazzling sweet!
thank U Rula!
Barbara Writes
10 years ago
Hi
Have you written haiku or senyru lately
Rula
10 years ago
hello Barbara
are we supposed to write haiku and senyru or only tanka
Barbara Writes
10 years ago
Rula
Thanks for joining. In this renga it doesn't matter senyru and haiku = tanka welcome.
Barbara Writes
10 years ago
Rula
Thanks for joining. In this renga it doesn't matter senyru and haiku = tanka welcome.
Rula
10 years ago
thank you
Steve. So kind of you to give this one a visit.
Appreciate it
Barbara Writes
10 years ago
Glad to see you Steve
Welcome to eternal renga