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Jan 16, 2016
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Love Lost
Empty bed cold heart
only memories remain
dreams buried alive
— Buddha, Jan 16, 2016
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About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Critiques
Rula
10 years 4 months ago
a good little
Poem. I think its subject make it a senyru. Whatever,
welcome to Neopoet.
Buddha
10 years 4 months ago
Thank you Rula, you are right
Thank you Rula, you are right, the subject is much closer to a Senru than a Haiku, I appreciate your review and your kind words. I am looking forward to reviewing some of yours this evening. Buddha
lovedly
10 years 4 months ago
still
God blessed
Buddha
wisdom still alive
Buddha
10 years 4 months ago
Thank you as always Lovedly.
Thank you as always Lovedly. I can always rely on your reviews. Buddha
lovedly
10 years 4 months ago
hope you will
read those of mine
yet unread by any
Buddha
10 years 4 months ago
absolutely
absolutely