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trance dance in France

when I compose
I go into a trance

as if I'm in Paris
in France

or going around in romance
yes prance

as I poetically dance

obscure to the world around
I am to be spectacularly found

NOT to any law bound!
poetry is emotional display
we play
our own way

— lovedly, Jul 01, 2015

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Critiques

alidzain

alidzain

10 years 11 months ago

aah

a little play with some rhyme I see.

I wish I could rhyme well,
but most of the time its's hell
to keep it going for me
that's why I envy you, see?

When I compose
I hope its not prose
Hate to irritate Mr Wes
want to give my best

I fly into wonderland
where elves wander hand in hand
and fairies danced in the night
their motion filled with delight

I plunged into darkness
to see its many faces
and form a balance in my write
of shadows and glory light

Now this little poem I offer
doesn't make me a rhyme master
just a practing student
learning from you for self-betterment.

Alid

lovedly

lovedly

10 years 11 months ago

UR RHYMING IS

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
ouchhhhhhhhhhhh
like laying on the couch
enjoying music

lovely alidz

alidzain

alidzain

10 years 11 months ago

hehe

glad you liked it.

Alid

lovedly

lovedly

10 years 11 months ago

twas meant to be

without pants on naturally stan
ur a man
u ought to know
pun intended