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Jun 06, 2015
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Humidity is warm
the needles stiff sharp arm
points its per cent
"Your wit is a work"
Shall I fetch tea?
do be a dear..........
— Esker, Jun 06, 2015
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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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weirdelf
11 years ago
Feels a tad non sequitur-ish, even for me
nice tone though.