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lovedly

Mar 07, 2015 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

memories only live

Sad but marvelous
memories remain immortal
we love
we lust
all else we do
we must
but memories
only last

all else does rust

— lovedly, Mar 07, 2015

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Critiques

11 years 4 months ago

How true

And we become prisoners of our memories - especially the bad unresolved ones. We live and relive them as though nothing has changed. This piece touhed something very deep within.

Cheers ... Leonard

11 years 4 months ago

thank you so much

Leonard for ur maiden visit and comment
grateful

11 years 4 months ago

Lovedly...

This is one of your best works that I have read in a while! Short and sweet! No convoluted meanings and perfectly understandable. Marvelous! ~ Gee

11 years 4 months ago

that you so see Dearest Geezer...

is a feather in the Neopoet's eye
as they have converted
a poet out of me
and
so I thank
all of thee
Judy and Jess specially

R

11 years 4 months ago

Lovedly

As others before me have commented, this is one of your better ones, though I feel you can work some more on this to make it flow easily on tongue...just my opinion...i wish i could suggest how..

Regards,

11 years 4 months ago

thank u raj sublime

your Blessings were needed
this one fetched
a gold for me =5 stars

11 years 4 months ago

This is pleasing.

Subtle, yet I understood it.

11 years 4 months ago

thank you so much Snowman

on another site
they gave me
A GOLD==5 stars for this one
thanks

11 years 4 months ago

Hi Lovedly

Yes I agree - this is one of your best. :) it's easy to understand and easy to relate too.

Beautiful in it's simplicity.

Love Mand xxx

11 years 4 months ago

thank you mand

all kind minds think alike

11 years 4 months ago

Loved are you Joe ? I am

Loved are you Joe ? I am confuzzled ... damn good poem though whomever wrote it !!

love Jayne x

11 years 4 months ago

no... I am not Joe

I am old Loved now technically Lovedly
coz of computer failure only

thanks many have liked it
awaiting Judy

11 years 4 months ago

Our Jayne

Lovedly was Loved
Sparrow was Ian.T
We still love you just the same your new
Papa xx

11 years 4 months ago

great write loved

No waffle, one of your best
I knew you could do it :)
love judy
xxx

11 years 4 months ago

Thanks Judie

but you took so long to read this
In a competition elsewhere
I got a Gold=5 Stars for this.
Thanks to your teaching
of slitting all waffle
regards

11 years 4 months ago

Thanks Judie

You took too long to read my poetry
which won a gold =5 star
in some competition
Thanks to you
No waffle this!
Judie Regards

11 years 4 months ago

Loved

As all the other poets, a great little write.
Told you that you are OK when you put your mind to it,
Yours Ian..

11 years 4 months ago

thanks

sparrowe ianed

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